Sentence Improvement

Sentence Improvement Q&A:

1. Original Sentence: He not only broke the record but also he set a new one.
   • Improvement: He not only broke the record but also set a new one.
2. Original Sentence: The car is not only fast but it is also expensive.
   • Improvement: The car is not only fast but also expensive.
3. Original Sentence: The book was not only interesting, but it was also informative.
   • Improvement: The book was not only interesting but also informative.
4. Original Sentence: She dances good.
   • Improvement: She dances well.
5. Original Sentence: The company decided to close down neither their branches nor their subsidiaries.
   • Improvement: The company decided to close down neither its branches nor its subsidiaries.
6. Original Sentence: We not only visited the museum, but also we explored the nearby park.
   • Improvement: We not only visited the museum but also explored the nearby park.
7. Original Sentence: The movie was so boring that I almost fell asleep, hardly I could stay awake.
   • Improvement: The movie was so boring that I almost fell asleep; hardly could I stay awake.
8. Original Sentence: John is as tall, if not taller, than his brother.
   • Improvement: John is as tall as, if not taller than, his brother.
9. Original Sentence: My cat is very playful, he runs around the house all day.
   • Improvement: My cat is very playful; he runs around the house all day.

• Original Sentence: The team played good, however, they lost the match.
  • Improvement: The team played well; however, they lost the match.
• Original Sentence: She is neither interested in painting neither in sculpture.
  • Improvement: She is interested in neither painting nor sculpture.
• Original Sentence: The weather is not good, neither it’s sunny.
  • Improvement: The weather is not good, nor is it sunny.
• Original Sentence: The conference was informative, and it was also very long.
  • Improvement: The conference was informative and also very long.
• Original Sentence: Not only he completed the project, but also he submitted it before the deadline.
  • Improvement: Not only did he complete the project, but he also submitted it before the deadline.
• Original Sentence: She is as talented or even more talented than her sister.
  • Improvement: She is as talented as or even more talented than her sister.
• Original Sentence: I can’t able to understand the complex concept.
  • Improvement: I can’t understand the complex concept.
• Original Sentence: Both the cat and the dog is sleeping in the living room.
  • Improvement: Both the cat and the dog are sleeping in the living room.
• Original Sentence: She did good in the exam, however, she could have done better.
  • Improvement: She did well in the exam; however, she could have done better.
• Original Sentence: Neither the teacher nor the students is happy with the new rule.
  • Improvement: Neither the teacher nor the students are happy with the new rule.
• Original Sentence: The mountain is not only high, but it’s also treacherous.
  • Improvement: The mountain is not only high but also treacherous.

Sentence Improvement Q&A:

1. Original Sentence: I am good at neither singing and dancing.
   • Improvement: I am good at neither singing nor dancing.
2. Original Sentence: The test was too difficult, I can’t able to complete it.
   • Improvement: The test was too difficult; I couldn’t complete it.
3. Original Sentence: He is taller than me.
   • Improvement: He is taller than I.
4. Original Sentence: The movie was good, but it could have been more better.
   • Improvement: The movie was good, but it could have been better.
5. Original Sentence: Each of the students were given a book.
   • Improvement: Each of the students was given a book.
6. Original Sentence: The weather is not good, neither it’s raining.
   • Improvement: The weather is not good, nor is it raining.
7. Original Sentence: She sings good.
   • Improvement: She sings well.
8. Original Sentence: He passed the exam easily, because he studied hardly.
   • Improvement: He passed the exam easily because he studied hard.
9. Original Sentence: The project was not only difficult but also it was time-consuming.
   • Improvement: The project was not only difficult but also time-consuming.

• Original Sentence: I did not meet neither John and Mary at the party.
  • Improvement: I did not meet either John or Mary at the party.
• Original Sentence: The cake was so delicious, I could hardly eat it.
  • Improvement: The cake was so delicious that I could hardly eat it.
• Original Sentence: She is not only intelligent, but she is also hardworking.
  • Improvement: She is not only intelligent but also hardworking.
• Original Sentence: He went to the store, and bought some milk.
  • Improvement: He went to the store and bought some milk.
• Original Sentence: She is not interested in neither sports nor music.
  • Improvement: She is interested in neither sports nor music.
• Original Sentence: The hotel was very expensive, but it was having a great view.
  • Improvement: The hotel was very expensive, but it had a great view.
• Original Sentence: The company is planning to hire more staff, and they are organizing a job fair.
  • Improvement: The company is planning to hire more staff and organizing a job fair.
• Original Sentence: We went for a walk, and then we had coffee.
  • Improvement: We went for a walk and then had coffee.
• Original Sentence: This is the first time I have ever seen such a beautiful sunset.
  • Improvement: This is the first time I have seen such a beautiful sunset.
• Original Sentence: She is more taller than her sister.
  • Improvement: She is taller than her sister.
• Original Sentence: The team played good in the tournament.
  • Improvement: The team played well in the tournament.